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Revision 2
My Experience in Writing 2
This semester, I study writing two with these two
lecturers that is Mrs. LeniMarlina and Mr. Muhammad Ansyar. This semester I
learned about making an essay: the narrative essay, discussion essay and review
essay. All of them need extra hard working. When I studied writing two in this
semester, there are several experiences that I have with Mrs. LeniMarlina. Now,
I will tell about my experience in writing two with one of my lectures, Mrs. LeniMarlina
or well known as Mrs. Lina.
When I learned writing two, I get a lot of useful and
exciting experienceand it also makes me sad, upset and uncomfortable. Rewarding
and interesting experience was when Mrs. Lina gives the task to create an essay
like narrative essay, discussion essay and review essay. After making an essay
Mrs. Lina asked us to copy essays that we have done and give it to friends to
re-examine this task. It is a very interesting way that can help me to write an
essay better. Furthermore, I also can study honest, responsibility and confident
in doing the tasks. I should not copy and paste from other friends. I also amcareful,
concentrations, and focus in doing something, learn from the mistakes that make
us more enthusiasm in writing.
I also feel the experiences that makes me sad, upset
and uncomfortable are when I study every Saturday,three classes that studied
that Mrs. Lina, k1, K2 and nk2, were studying in a room called “ld1”. We should
study in a very small class with more than many students in that class. It must
be hot and crowded. My experience was about the assignments. Mrs. Lina gave us
o lot of assignments this semester. Started from free writing consist of experience
in studying writing one last semester. Furthermore a groups assignment that
have presented in make-up class.
I am very sad, because I do not have laptop to
do the assignment that Mrs. Lina ordered us,
so that it makes me difficult. I also do
not have enough money to print my assignments, to copy it, and make a blog to
publish my assignments. Therefore, I often lend money from my friends in my
boarding house. Furthermore, in making assignments, I need long time to make it.
It often makes me confused about what will I write.
In addition, I will explain about my best writing
project in writing two is narrative text; the title is “Lebaran Day”. I choose
it because this story based on my experience. In first story, I write based on
imagination and fiction that change events that happens in story that I make,
but still based on my experience. Meanwhile, in second story I write based in
fact, but in this story I removed a character stepped on cat’s tail in a
lebaran day. In second story, the main character’s motorcycle got accident and
crashed a big stone. I write this story because I want to remind the
unforgettable event in that time. And I think it is easy for me to write the
story based on my experience rather than fiction, and I can explain it more
detail.
Finally, I have many experiences that I felt in
writing two, I can learn one important thing, which we must try to do our best
to reach the best thing, should not give up, be able to be better, and always
be patient to do everything that we want. For Mrs. Lina, thank you very much to
all of the support to us especially me. I hope that we will get success.
pay attention to your tenses.
BalasHapusYeah, I think your essay will be better if you pay attention to the tenses as mentioned by esi.
BalasHapusi agree with Esi and Ulva's suggestion Sis :)
BalasHapuskeep fighting^^