Kamis, 10 Oktober 2013

Experience in writing 2


YusismiMurni
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K.1 / 2012
Revision 2

My Experience in Writing 2
This semester, I study writing two with these two lecturers that is Mrs. LeniMarlina and Mr. Muhammad Ansyar. This semester I learned about making an essay: the narrative essay, discussion essay and review essay. All of them need extra hard working. When I studied writing two in this semester, there are several experiences that I have with Mrs. LeniMarlina. Now, I will tell about my experience in writing two with one of my lectures, Mrs. LeniMarlina or well known as Mrs. Lina.
When I learned writing two, I get a lot of useful and exciting experienceand it also makes me sad, upset and uncomfortable. Rewarding and interesting experience was when Mrs. Lina gives the task to create an essay like narrative essay, discussion essay and review essay. After making an essay Mrs. Lina asked us to copy essays that we have done and give it to friends to re-examine this task. It is a very interesting way that can help me to write an essay better. Furthermore, I also can study honest, responsibility and confident in doing the tasks. I should not copy and paste from other friends. I also amcareful, concentrations, and focus in doing something, learn from the mistakes that make us more enthusiasm in writing.
I also feel the experiences that makes me sad, upset and uncomfortable are when I study every Saturday,three classes that studied that Mrs. Lina, k1, K2 and nk2, were studying in a room called “ld1”. We should study in a very small class with more than many students in that class. It must be hot and crowded. My experience was about the assignments. Mrs. Lina gave us o lot of assignments this semester. Started from free writing consist of experience in studying writing one last semester. Furthermore a groups assignment that have presented in make-up class.
I am very sad, because I do not have laptop to do the assignment that Mrs. Lina ordered us, so that it makes me difficult. I also do not have enough money to print my assignments, to copy it, and make a blog to publish my assignments. Therefore, I often lend money from my friends in my boarding house. Furthermore, in making assignments, I need long time to make it. It often makes me confused about what will I write.
In addition, I will explain about my best writing project in writing two is narrative text; the title is “Lebaran Day”. I choose it because this story based on my experience. In first story, I write based on imagination and fiction that change events that happens in story that I make, but still based on my experience. Meanwhile, in second story I write based in fact, but in this story I removed a character stepped on cat’s tail in a lebaran day. In second story, the main character’s motorcycle got accident and crashed a big stone. I write this story because I want to remind the unforgettable event in that time. And I think it is easy for me to write the story based on my experience rather than fiction, and I can explain it more detail.
Finally, I have many experiences that I felt in writing two, I can learn one important thing, which we must try to do our best to reach the best thing, should not give up, be able to be better, and always be patient to do everything that we want. For Mrs. Lina, thank you very much to all of the support to us especially me. I hope that we will get success.

3 komentar:

  1. Yeah, I think your essay will be better if you pay attention to the tenses as mentioned by esi.

    BalasHapus
  2. i agree with Esi and Ulva's suggestion Sis :)
    keep fighting^^

    BalasHapus